Slowly

The Daily Post


Crunch.

Crunch

Tink Tink shhhhhhht. 

Crunch phhhhhhsssssssss. 

Splat.

Splat.

Squuueeeaaakkkk. “Wait. Wait! No! Please no! Ahhhhhhh!”

Crunch.

Crunch.

Crunch…

2 thoughts on “Slowly

  1. I like this! Yes, like music to my ears or an orgasm of the eyes, it explodes off the page!

    When it is all over it positively compels me with its simplicity as it holds within it that beautiful crunch! I witness the pain, short and sweet as I read, but I also think just because the poem ends doesn’t mean this poor unfortunate souls pain has ended.

    It is kind of like glimpsing a tiny fracture of ones personal pain.

    Excellent work!

    Cheers! ^_^

    Liked by 2 people

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